Call From My Heart. Comments

Leaves, blissful leaves waves; cheers and clapping, with the smiling flowWith my force fTo be again with the forgotten, mingling my valor faultless flowingers of future, ...... This is unequalled insight into life and mysterious and a sense of secret in every line.. tony

very lyrical and evocative, Nurul...the lines have a very pleasing rhythm and sound quality

so nice poem... heart says...10 Have we not moved to modern period? Where people find it difficult to avoid Temptation and greediness With mad chase

simply profound! This poem is one of profound insight.

Let your heart lead you on! Along the path of the truth. Thanks for sharing.

Making marred chaotic mirth to cosmos and meaning........... i like the alliterations, BUT, unlike Dr. tony Brahmin (see comment, below) , i do NOT 'like the sense of mystery always. mystery is ok sometimes. sometimes mystery makes a very good story/poem. but, for me, when mystery is due to not understanding the meanings of the words linked together, i don't care for it very much, if at all. : ( [again some nice alliterations]: With my forceful faultless flouring red’s flood.............BUT do you want flouring or flowering or flowing? ? does red's equals blood's? ? sorry, Heart, we don't 'speak' the same language! but, thanks (i think) for sharing. bri ;)

my heart says.......... there is a sense of mystery all through the poem. i like the sense of mystery always. thank you very much