Call 911 Comments

I like ur vision and message. Same thing happened to a friend of mine, n she just told Me of it today. Although she wasn't with a gun, I felt a bit of the sadness she felt. Thanks for sharing... Keep it up.

Reminds me of the song BAD MEDICINE popularized by BON JOVI... I woul like also to mention LOVE ME BACK TO LIFE, also by BON JOVI, one of my fave bands.... you have penned an amazing poem.... a perfect 10, Roshana....

We need a surgeon that able to operate her emotion and a nurse to put her mind stronger...911 is outside in inside.. Good idea to write Roshana

Again, another good piece with strong imagery....this one definitely needs a bit more tidying up on some of the lines though. I would be happy to help out if you'd would like? I am at work now, but I'd would be happy to help in a few hours if you want? Glad you contacted me as many of my unfinished pieces have similar themes (by that I mean I have experienced what it can get like on the mental/emotional pain front also)