Thursday, September 15, 2011

Call Comments

Rating: 5.0

A call of hue resonance blew from tomb
the pegions gathered at the ground of shrine
waiting for as rightful seeds from a Mercy
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Aranthabailu Ummar
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Unwritten Soul 15 September 2011

This is genuine writing and has a style of you, 'will blow 5 times' that such a big meaning here and 5calls in a day would be a good reminder to have such calming :) 'bribe to god'..I know you mean very good to tell but, saying Bribe is not really suitable i guess...Seems like it taken by God..maybe you can try some other words..the words of love coz it refers to Him..Over all this is nice writing and i like it :) _Unwritten Soul

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