California Girls! Comments

thats really cool i really like it

This was really cute. And it seems to me that you've had a lot of experience ;) I'm proud to be a California lady lol

A fascinating and amusing poem. Great work.

nice poem.........i really enjoyed reading: }

original and creative work! I loved the flow, I could easily recite it/

Such a fun, it's a nice refreshment to read poems that aren't about such deep, profound things. I just hope one day i can experience all these states for myself! Great poem, it made me smile! x

A very amusing read. An original mind is definately at work here.10, for your creative energy. Warm wishes, Sandra

LOL, this is cute and definitely different :) , some may be offended....I wasnt, and all of MY states sounded like me LMAO! ! ! if that makes sense-lol 10 :)

you already know where i'm from 'California' i love the flow, the way you described the women according to where they lived. Fun to read and funny to read. I laughed at 'New York - just talk talk talk......Nebraska- just want to fax ya......Missouri- love the smell of pot pouri.....