Tuesday, February 11, 2014
Calendar Of Beautiful Days Comments
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Despairs awoke my body’s chiming clock
And my eyes are covered with a black smoke
Heavy load of burden was on my back
And on my neck was an inspiring yoke
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Sally Plumb Plumb
12 February 2014
We are all looking forward to beautiful days in England. (Thanks for spelling correction.I did juggle with the two words myself)
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7/23/2025 11:35:02 PM # 1.0.0
Marc, I like your poem immensely. The last two lines are perfection. The poem is relatable throughout, but it was still blazingly original in your choice of metaphor. I like the way you return to the calendar in the very last line.