Calcium Comments

yall crackheads.........................................

Your imagination can go to great lengths in order for others to feel what you do....some fantasies are great enough....to remain within the boundaries of your fertile imagination....beyond that its pure terror...Welcome to the twilight zone........ Cheers. Subroto

So creative and unique... Very nice. Nice imagination you got!

Your knowledge of poetic devices both astounds and impresses me. Calcium... never would've thought it myself.

ah desire to wear the lover like breath.... ah the need to have the lovers warmth in blood so there are no glaciers of denial rejection the need to conume lover so envy dies forever

A very unique and different idea of description of such rare topic....the symbolic representation of something you would want to retain forever is the most uplifting essence of this poem....10/10

Fantastic idea, lovely write, love with 10+++