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I really love all of Roger McGough's funny poems.

A thought provoking poem. Cleverly written.

Hehehe.... I makes me sneer............. Nice one by Roger MacGough.....

Apparently funny, but certainly there lies sad episodes beneath the lines.

Deeply meaningful drop. Sometimes life gives a shock and you can't take the same path with the one you love. Thanks for sharing.

Fun from the master but also, perhaps, the reason why so many human relationships fail or become nasty.

I agree with Paul Brookes. The poem has many layers. It is up to the reader to see the reality.

So much depth in these four lines. A bad relationship can ruin one's life.

You have to look beneath the surface humour and you find hidden a poem of depth and sadness. its existence in more than one realm leaves and after image which the reader cannot easily dispel. Clever write.

we are we scarcity can't touch us we're in transmutation! //// great

So lovely poem. I enjoyed this poem

ur mom gay ur dad lesbian ur granny tranny ur sister a mister ur brother is ur mother

Lack of mutual respect and accommodation in a relationship will lead to this unhappy situation. Sad but realistic portrayal. Thanks.

Hahaha, , funny poem..

There is no way out I think. Hahahahaha. Nice drop. Enjoyed.

a lovely humorous poem of how conflict unites people but not for the better? ...........wicked Rog

very nice and humorous... Thanking you for sharing.10+

Such a funny poem hahaha.....😂😂😂

Facing the ways of life! ! ! Thanks for sharing.

A poem in which beauty, humour and poetic skills coexist. Thanks for the sharing of the lovely poem.10++++ for the poem.