Caitlyn Comments

The point of a poem isnt about rhyme and rythem, its about an expession of emotion, getting an idea across, making an impact, healing a heart ect. and those things you do sooo well. Don't be down on yourself. There are already enough people in the world who work at criticizing the arts, don't be one of them. :) I understand what you are talking about when you speak of this precious little girl. They are so young and innocent in this cruel world, breath in the fresh air they exert anytime you get a chance. Don't know you but love you, Sabrina Rice

this one is really good i understand i work with kids and they are amazing...it makes u feel so warm inside because they love u just as u are good job

why do you say your poems aren't good? ? ? it's fantastic and had an idea...and you could express it..good one! !

why do you say your poems aren't good? ? ? it's fantastic and had an idea...and you could express it..good one! !

This poem is not bad. I liked it very much, it speaks the truth and is well put together and it does not have to rhyme. Good job.......