Saturday, October 7, 2017

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My niece driving into a curve
Broadsided by a careless, hurried young man
She lost control, her car flipped on its side
She...crushed. This fair young beauty died
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Tan Pratonix 25 October 2017

Powerful poem. You have poetic talent. (I feel so sorry that my poem A Brief Romance was dismissed by you with one sharp comment. Romantic relationships based on infatuation fall apart.)

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Christopher 28 February 2019

Very late response, but thank you Tan for reading and your comments. Her family, especially her mother had a very hard time adjusting to the loss. And still is after all this time...

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