Saturday, June 23, 2012

Caged... Like A Three Legged Pig. Comments

Rating: 4.5

Do not seek refuge in the places that I do,
Such places would do you no good.
This is all around me, It follows me there.
I am told it is not necessary to fear one's own kind,
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H.J. Shreeve
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Olumide Omoyele 28 April 2013

Brilliant. Enjoyed this wonderful critique of modernity!

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Jim Boone 15 July 2012

Wow! This is powerful and scented with the need to be done with a situation. Hayden you are one of my favorite Poets. I am glad we are 'friends' in poetry on poemhunter. I read you as often as I can.

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Hayden Shreeve 27 June 2012

Thankyou Sharon, i look forward to reading some of your work

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Sharon Kiprono 23 June 2012

wow. the diction is perfect

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H.J. Shreeve

H.J. Shreeve

Hobart, Tasmania
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