Tuesday, March 27, 2007

Caged Less Bird Comments

Rating: 5.0

the bird which flies
freely across the sky is
what i want to become
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jennifer her
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Someone Else 30 March 2007

nicely done. Flows freely with YOUR voice, gets the point across and flows with a fine web of continuity that begins and ends with enveloping style,

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Michael Gale 27 March 2007

A great reading. An easy tenner. To be free as a bird soaring freely as free as free. God bless all poets-MJG.

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