Thursday, June 18, 2009

Caged In Pain And Hurt Comments

Rating: 5.0

BETRAYAL
being leafed for dead
blood raining from
the heavens
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Akira Anderson
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Saadat Tahir 18 June 2009

CAGED IN PAIN AND HURT so strong and dark....rips through the soul...what could have given u the wherewithal to write like this...its so dark that its more of an epitaph rather than poetry... ten and cheers

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Virginie Yargeau 18 June 2009

just feel lost and trapped an hurt huh? i get it.trust me. ive been there.This poem brings back such memories, past pains hurts and confusion. im still there though cant get away... nice poem though.very deep and understanding.beautiful comparison; betrayal death life and love. all similar in some strange way.

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