Caged Hope Comments
Two love birds, sitting sad in the cage
Viewing the life on every single page
They are all the same for the one in jail
But they try to see the worlds and freedom, even pale
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What a beauty in poetry! Beautiful imaginative scripting. Loved it
A striking title and a lovely poem on love and companionship. Warm regards, Bipasha
Wonderful imaginary and imagery. A touching pictue of life without freedom has been so nicely and vividly portrayed. Secrifice of lover has been too painted intensely. I like to quote here.... I will never leave you my beloved kind Even if the cage is broken into pieces, I stay, you never mind.. Thanks. Full vote.
thank you so much for your comments that makes me encouraged to be like you in the future.
What a touching poem of two hearts, the lesson, the meaning, the narrative style and story are wonderful...its so lovely to see how each other supporting together living in same situation by exchanging hopes and loves. So much things going here that make me appreciate your work..lovely one!
I am happy that you like this poem. thanks for the comment, hope this piece really deserve it.
hey try to see the worlds and freedom, even pale Close your eyes open your wings, Making a nest in the spring with the sticks She looked and sighed and did repine fancy and dreams Even if the cage is broken into pieces, I stay, you never mind These are the points which i collected from your poem after reading it carefully.. Thank you very much for this poem. Very great imagination and you use it as symbols of never failing love. Thank you
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7/25/2025 10:50:16 PM # 1.0.0
A touching poem, life of a a couple of birds in a cage so nicely described.
Sepas, sir Jawad You are always encouraging me, by your comments. Thanks.