Caged Dreams Comments

An enchanting and mesmerizing poem that touches the heart.

Beautiful poem. I feel her pain in each word.

Such beautiful words yet so much pain expressed.

My favourite expression is...the strength of the invisible, the powers of the inaccessible... A good piece. Thanks for sharing.

I do hope, Susanta, that she gets freed from the cage and her dreams are translated into reality very soon...

She stopped dreaming about real things, then she moved to the incredible dreams.... It's a great transformation of one's dreams from a case into another case.

Innumerable facets to think of, feel, work with, and be concerned about with love. How wonderfully and humanely one viewed a girl who face d caging, by some force against it. Very touching.

she was passed from hand to hand for mere amusement and joy. seems to be too sad, but she has to come out of it, instead of trying to rest beside her mother. any way congratulations Susanta Pattnayak..Keep it up

eternally till eternity, very fine, I like it.

Nicely done. Liked it. Good job.

Poetic Beauty: She returns to hope , though late! Wonderfull! !

There is a sense of defeat in the lines and the urge to escape

well written. desperation seeking release from what seems eternal pain.

Well written with a lot of big images.

very beautiful ... poignant!

It can be considered as a cage song. Well.