Tuesday, February 26, 2008

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Feeling restraint
Brewing up a rage
Don't go left
Don't go right
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Laury Wong
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As a result deteoriate I need to unlace Why won't you give me my space? ? to begivensutiable space in life..... very well planned poem dear... i love it....10 read mine yoy go alone..... yes to to.. come home andno separate ways

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Jd Jennings 26 February 2008

Often we walk a narrow path between love's deep feelings and love's oppressive touches. If love touches one oppressively, crowds one in, constricting ones space, then is it truly love? For the first duty of love is to set free that which is loved so that the loved soul can fly higher than it ever has before. Food for thought my friend, from an old thinker. Good poem tho.

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Laury Wong

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