Caged Comments

PH played up when I voted (like it always does and it drives me nuts sometimes) and a 9 went through - I meant for this to be a well-deserved 10! Mark

Excellent metaphor Viola, nicely written too. Regards Mark

to cage me alive. Perched on a promise.... kudos Ms. Grey

this is Intimate I really like this. very good I am goin to add to my favs. Becca

Throw me a wink, clip my wings, tether me home and make me yours. - That made me smile, what a wonderful way to put it. I love how you play with words, you truly make them your own

The ability to capture the sensitivity of a new found love with a glance, a smile, a wink.a kiss! ! Awe-sume in deed! Very nicely done.

it is a secret feeding watching someone until they catch your glance, none of us are as young as when we are thinking about the mess of love, the fact that you have to learn truth very tenderly, this is coy sunshine, thanks

Very nice work sensual and thoughtful with a great flow 10+ Ivor

a sweet little fluttering soul longing to get love-caged...marvelous write 10

loving your work Viola, nice piece 10

Now that is a nice write, the sun is shinning 10 Paris