Tuesday, June 2, 2015

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A LITTLE BOY WITH WAVING CAGE,
ASKED ME ABOUT CUCKOO’S POIGNANT AGE.

IN THE CUCKOO’S EYES, WHEN I GAZED
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MUSAWIR RAAKH
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2015

This charming sight. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 02 June 2015

A great story of faith in oneself. It needs a little correction and will be far better after. The words are strong and beautiful. So you can tighten them up and make a beautiful writing. Mohabeer Beeharry

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