Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Cagayan De Oro In Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

On 16nth day of December
I, alone hear voices
in distance,
rising - falling.
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Cyrus Diaz
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Joey Valenzuela 29 December 2012

well penned... the imagery is vivid... nice conclusion. though i didnt like much the first line, its still good as a whole..

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Ency Bearis 13 January 2012

Oh, such a heart rending tragedy that happened there in that area, and you expressed well the fear during that time poetically, nice write.

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