James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
Tuesday, December 9, 2008

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Loneliness can be counted on
but is no friend of mine lonely
are my days I can count by the
thousands black is the color
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James McLain
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Bri Edwards 03 June 2019

i'll have to think about this in my dreams tonight! this first half of poem is much better for my understanding, after i put in 'my punctuation'! bri :)

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Chuck Petz 10 December 2008

Dark thoughts but concise and expressive.Well crafted!

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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