Saturday, January 26, 2008

Cadmus’ Amnesia Comments

Rating: 5.0

Even when the sky is full of disaster,
Tell me, what can they take from you-
When you have hidden the hungry mouths
Scattered in the silken forest,
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Robert Rorabeck
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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 09 September 2009

Excellent Poet Ten dr. sakti Please read my Amnesia series 1-5 and comment and rate if you please.

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This poem really intrigued me. I'll be honest, I hung on like to a roller coaster, not quite sure what was happening or where I was going. I stumbled off at the end a bit dizzy, but I'd kind of like to ride again. Maybe next time, I'll figure out a bit more about the twists and the turns. Good write and thanks for posting, L&T

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Robert Rorabeck

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