Monday, August 2, 2010

Cactus Comments

Rating: 2.9

silhouetted against
a blazing sky
a thinning horizon
absorbing the dirge
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Leonard Dabydeen 03 August 2010

superlative imagery bringing the cactus to life in its desert domain. not so sure why...' there she stands/the forlorn queen of the desert'... Thanks for sharing. Leonard

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Leonard Dabydeen 03 August 2010

superlative imagery bringing the cactus to life in its desert domain. not so sure why...' there she stands/the forlorn queen of the desert'...

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premji premji 02 August 2010

read it in poetfreak

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Sadiqullah Khan 02 August 2010

Great. He or She... :)) . Very subtle and powerful.{lone flower-many thorns} 10

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