Tuesday, June 22, 2010

C.R.E.A.M. (Cash Rules Everything Around Me) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Emotions shifting
Motion sickness
The motions of the world
Exploding with its devotion to the dollar
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Darrin McMiller Jr.
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Cleide Tatyana Almeida 14 July 2010

I think the acronym C.R.E.A.M, the title, is clever and captivating...its extremely harsh but not untrue. It can be depressing or refreshing depending on the mood you're in when you're reading it...right now it depresses me but that's not bad. If a poem can inspire emotion, then the poet did something right. Keep it up!

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Issam Hal 07 July 2010

a very sensetive piece always reminds u of the reality we live

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