Friday, October 6, 2006

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Rating: 2.7

There was a hearth;
a fire there;
chairs;
and, I remember, love;
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Michael Shepherd
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Deva De Silva 20 April 2009

Contentment in short but the imagery was amazing... All we need a few cues from a great mind and you've mastered the art in it.

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Fay Slimm 22 August 2008

Peace exudes from these few words - a ten, and no less.

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Chris Mendros 13 July 2007

a picture's worth 21 words, in this case...

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Marvin Brato 02 July 2007

Simply beautiful poem Mr. Shepherd, thanks for sharing. rate is 10 for me.

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Melvina Germain 11 May 2007

Now this feels good, I love it.--Melvina--

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Robert Howard 09 May 2007

A charmed moment exquisitely captured. A plague on the equine rectums who defiled this gem with low numbers! !

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Ivor Hogg 17 March 2007

Never a word wasted succinct and speaks volumes in a few chosen phrases

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Iquo Umoh 10 November 2006

nice poem well written and simple

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Lori Boulard 12 October 2006

Beautiful. A perfect expression; not another word needed. I wish I could write like this!

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Alison Cassidy 07 October 2006

I needed to read this tonight. Thanks Michael...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 October 2006

You take these 21 words, place them on paper via pen (of course) , and Paint a love scene that i can picture in my Mind's eye, as i comment here.As simple as that, that is unless i refer to my own fabricated diction, but everyone has their right to opinion, & i like this piece, and though I have not checked 'word origin' I will go on my admiration for you &assume all is what it should be, Michael...As usual, a masterfuly, succinct work; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; ; POPEYE, THE tRaIlBlAzEr

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

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