Monday, December 9, 2013

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Rating: 4.8

Not failure, low aim is crime
Big bangs too produce unique chime.
Blank can not a life's canvas be
With ample strokes of pain n glee.
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Ratnakar Mandlik
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 April 2019

Life is worth living inspite of all such odds For the human, loveliest incarnation of God........so touching and true. Beautiful poem is shared amazingly. Thanks for sharing. A 10.

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Geetha Jayakumar 04 August 2016

Beautiful liines.... Life is worth living inspite of all such odds For the human, loveliest incarnation of God. Make this a unique write on life. Loved reading all the lines.

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Norah Tunney 16 April 2016

Well written and wonderful subject I particularly like the last 2 lines Thank you Ratnakar

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Excellent presentation my friend. Keep wiring.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 March 2016

Life's canvas. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 06 December 2015

Life is worth living inspite of all such odds For the human, loveliest incarnation of God. A great portrayal of life with all its hopes, achievements, elation and agonising pain and celebrations of various stages as well as what God has endowed us with. Thanks.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2015

So nicely envisioned and nicely depicted. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Liza Sudina 15 October 2015

Birth - new Birth - Celebration again! .

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Bharati Nayak 09 October 2015

Blank can not a life's canvas be With ample strokes of pain n glee - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Life is worth living in spite of all such odds For the human, loveliest incarnation of God- - - -Really this human life should be celebrated in spite of all the trials and tribulations.A great poem.Thank you for sharing.

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M Asim Nehal 25 September 2015

Last two line took it to different level...Awesome poem Life is worth living inspite of all such odds For the human, loveliest incarnation of God.

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Valsa George 22 December 2013

Yes, man is the crown of God's creation and the life given to us has to be lived heroically. Inspite of all hardships and trials, our life is worth living! A great poem! ! Enjoyed! !

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Ratnakar Mandlik

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