Friday, August 18, 2006

(c) 35 (Life/Philosophy) Running Away? Comments

Rating: 3.3

My soul wants to fly away
Riding on a brilliant ray
To a land of oblivion
Where Im known by no one
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Preeti - is here! 24 August 2006

a very well written poem as it talks about the running away part and also the thought that its better to face life and roadblocks rather than to run away! niceee Preets

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Scarlet Red 23 August 2006

never run away my dear... its jz a matter of changing how u perceive on things.. its like, if u seem to be on the dark side.. jz make a great turn facing the sun so wont hav to see your shadow behind.. does it make it sense? lolz... nice choice of words...

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Arti Chopra 20 August 2006

very nice...simple and beautifully expressed..but life will be no fun if we have to live alone....

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