(c) 32 (Life/Philosophy) A New World Comments

My Response TO: A New World Where is that world that He made for me? There was unfolded everything that’s new! I was not I and you were not you; Orthodoxy, propriety and weakness - Needed no rebellion, no uprising! A league so fresh and novel, new-fangled! Where the essence was freed – Unbounded to authority & knowledge; Careless to the neighborhood rumors – Without any meddling or rituals; Devoid of the horror of moldering - Where ingenuity surfaced with no effort; And the reflections of freedom abound Where is that world that He made for me? There was unfolded everything that’s new!

ok... when and where... you can count me in! nice write. -Eila

OK...When can we start? ! A fine concept & penning in true, my dear....Spot-On in purpose & sublimity...fjr

Simply super! TO, you are the new generation poet..... I applaud all your efforts! They are all worth the time spent here...... keep writing!