Monday, September 18, 2006

(c) 27 (Life/Philosophy) Soul Water Comments

Rating: 3.4

You would be meandering by
Wasting your while
This world is not worth living under the sky
If you havnt tasted your soul water
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Geoff Warden 18 September 2006

T>O> beautiful poem Your use of words eqisite

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Ruby Root 18 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, Beautiful Poem. I am sure what it all means but excellent write. Take care.

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Patricia Gale 18 September 2006

Splendid piece, fantastic advice. I humbly bow to the words that fall from your hands.

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Catastrophe King 18 September 2006

Use intelligence to write Some true appreciations That will make her glee The Tranquil Ocean is pure Crystal clear Applaud it Cherish in it Anoint herself with it

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Nalini Hebbar 18 September 2006

needed this piece of inspiration badly today...thanks...love...nalini

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