Monday, September 25, 2006

(c) 23 (Life/Philosophy) A World Of Delusions Comments

Rating: 3.2

Thrown into this world
By who was I hurled
Emerged out crying and flailing arms
Till this day flailing in the storms
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Asma Bahrainwala 26 September 2006

TO.. u got me spell-bound with this 1... a superb beginning...4 lines sum it all.. last stanza is quite inspiring... an amazing write... love.. asma...

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Preeti - is here! 26 September 2006

And no one could have said it better than you! a 10! Preets

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David Darbyshire 26 September 2006

Very very nice Tran dave xxxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 25 September 2006

We are more than what the human eye sees....the pure virtues of who we are are intangible, as well they should be, for otherwise, what would allow a beauty & beast scenario happen in our real world...Yet it has, does & hopefully forever will...Wonderful piece, T.O.! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Patricia Gale 25 September 2006

Outstanding piece T.O.!

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