On one hand you fly high
In your thoughts
Never say die
On the otherhand you just sigh
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Hi Tranquil, Excellent poem and strong message behind your words. You almost sound angry at someone but very good points. Great write take care.
Are we the rapist or victim? Neat aspect of point. Again you've penned one well. My TEN gallon hat goes off to yee fine artist of brain and heart. God bless all poets-MJG.
T.O. an other finly penned poem.....rape of oneself......interesting concept........
Indeed you are and thanks so much for this poem. I think you have written and delivered this effectively and beautifully, Steve
Ms. Ocean>>>You are the skilled Poetess, young lady...A fine work of semi-abstract Verse...And i love it of course...''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
an excellent poem! duality...hypocrisy...a matter of convenience... rapist or victim? ...i'd say 'just human'...