Tuesday, September 19, 2006

(c) 19 (Life/Philosophy) Raped By Duality Comments

Rating: 3.3

On one hand you fly high
In your thoughts
Never say die
On the otherhand you just sigh
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Asma Bahrainwala 26 September 2006

an excellent poem! duality...hypocrisy...a matter of convenience... rapist or victim? ...i'd say 'just human'...

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Ruby Root 26 September 2006

Hi Tranquil, Excellent poem and strong message behind your words. You almost sound angry at someone but very good points. Great write take care.

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Michael Gale 23 September 2006

Are we the rapist or victim? Neat aspect of point. Again you've penned one well. My TEN gallon hat goes off to yee fine artist of brain and heart. God bless all poets-MJG.

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Geoff Warden 20 September 2006

T.O. an other finly penned poem.....rape of oneself......interesting concept........

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Steve Hagget 20 September 2006

Indeed you are and thanks so much for this poem. I think you have written and delivered this effectively and beautifully, Steve

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 September 2006

Ms. Ocean>>>You are the skilled Poetess, young lady...A fine work of semi-abstract Verse...And i love it of course...''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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