Thursday, May 11, 2006

Byron's Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.5

Come stand here, by the Peachey stone, atop this screaming hill,
enchant yourself in memories, imbibe yourself in thrill,
...
Read full text

Jerry Pike
COMMENTS
Callie Carroll 30 April 2008

I am enchanted by Byron's eyes for words, art, - his vision- and thus for your poem. 'Imbibe yourself in thrill' is riveting. Have you read 'The Monsters' (I think, since my progeny steal my books as soon as I read them.) ?

0 0 Reply
Dorothy Pugin 13 May 2006

I really liked this, especially the screaming hill in the first line.

0 0 Reply
Jerry Pike

Jerry Pike

Harrow, London, England
Close
Error Success