Come stand here, by the Peachey stone, atop this screaming hill,
enchant yourself in memories, imbibe yourself in thrill,
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I really liked this, especially the screaming hill in the first line.
I am enchanted by Byron's eyes for words, art, - his vision- and thus for your poem. 'Imbibe yourself in thrill' is riveting. Have you read 'The Monsters' (I think, since my progeny steal my books as soon as I read them.) ?