Wednesday, November 15, 2006

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Fierce impassioned flame
Set to byrning
Heart blazing wild
Spirit chyrning
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Sophia White
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Landrey 23 November 2006

A little OBSESSED with assonance here are we? ? I like it, gives a poem more depth, but I understood none of the story when I first read it-which is in a way good because it then it keeps its interest when you read it again, but to the casual reader this could have a damping effect. -stupi...ahem...landrey

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