Tuesday, November 8, 2016

Bye love bye Comments

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Slowly, at your leisure, the feast of a kiss,
a smile the colour of the sun, tourists in the land of dreams,
rainbow, how beautiful you are!, two bodies casting one shadow,
my tounge/my language melts, and I close my eyes, and I fall silent;
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Antoine 19 October 2019

Thank you Chinedu. I did not share these poems here, no idea who uploaded them. I think they might have just copy-pasted from lyrikline. This is in fact a literal English rendering of a multilingual sonnet or 'mużajk'. Other poems have been posted without indicated they are a translation, much less the name of the translator.

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Chinedu Dike 16 December 2016

I like the expression 'two bodies casting one shadow.' Beautiful love story, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Antoine. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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