Wednesday, May 17, 2006

Bye Bye Snowman Comments

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The snowmans smile turns into a frown
as he realizes the winter snow is mealting down.
The sun is beating,
the heat is heating,
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Mia Ocean
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Tracey Collins 17 May 2006

i like it right to the point, about spring coming and winter leaving.

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Kimberly Kastner 17 May 2006

mamma mia, mia! : -D Good poem! It was very creative how you put 'G O N E' at the end. Kudos! : -)

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