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What sorrow displayed in your diction. Brings out the sincere you.

If you are too much brooding about sorrow, you will attract more and more of it, at least in poetry.I don't know you are writing these for poetic sake or you feel happy to be sorrow. Any case, it's all mind that makes all these plays. Be watchful!

It's what I'm thinking about now...suicide...I wish it was so easy....beautyfull poem...

: o woahss....i loved it! ! !

i really liked this poem it was a beautiful poem i loved it keep writing millions of more :)

Sometimes we bite off more than we can chew and ending like this is akin to pointing the gun at all the people you love Tears of sorrrow, but you compel me to read more uavanice xmas regards

my soul cries for this poem write more please

powerful poem..i really liked it