Thursday, November 12, 2009

Bye Comments

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I walk home from school to see you getting beat up again.
I walk right past, not even looking back.

I know you will lose, but i don't care anymore.
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jacobb st.andrew
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Iron Panda 23™ 03 March 2010

<3 it! !

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Omar Ibrahim 24 November 2009

it's a good poem but you have to remember that poems are connotative to denotative....that's what sir ronald peat wrote in his essays.they're posted here on poemhunter.com you can check them for more information...otherwise your poem is good....just don't stop writing.

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Eyan Desir 17 November 2009

Awww. sad poem..I hope this is not a true story... I will walk with my pencil in case I need to fight....I dont want anyone to kill themselves

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