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The waking bird's chipping of first morning
The eastern sky is painted the sun is rising
The soft fresh beauty is laid on flower
Light of the Sun dancing on the shower
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Beautiful piece! It shows that there is still hope for humanity in midst of all this chaos and suffering. Thanks for sharing
The first light of morning The waking bird's collarbone The soft purity that lies on the grass-flower-------Fantastic expression
Deep and passionate piece of poetry written from the heart. A beautiful love poem.
A most beautiful canvas of nature in this scintillating poem. Bravo, dear poet! Immense imaginable,5 stars!
I like this poem. What makes the poem effective is taking the longing for love to a new height contrasting it with all the luxuries and beauty of nature poet loves dearly.
Look at the dance of rice paddy...I can visualize a great picture that you have drawn through this magnificent poem...5 stars
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9/8/2025 7:54:49 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful!
Many many thanks best wishes