Thursday, January 1, 2004

By Their Works Comments

Rating: 3.3

Who cleaned up the Last Supper?
These would be my people.
Maybe hung over, wanting
desperately a better job,
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Bob Hicok
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Paresh Chakra 12 December 2018

What is a wonderful poem 10++++++

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Syamchandran perinkulam 24 March 2018

Good poem.please read my poems in poem hunter

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Carlos Echeverria 08 March 2018

Conveys His kindness and humanity more than a cleric ever could.

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Lyn Paul 08 March 2018

A beautiful poem. As is The painting of The Last Supper. It is a painting that starts the mind. Thank you for expressing all of our possible thoughts.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 08 March 2018

A nice poem on the theme crafted so beautifully. 10

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Seamus O Brian 08 March 2018

(cont) Brilliantly envisioned and conveyed. Confronts us with our own bent toward hypocrisy, and forces us to adjust paradigms that are handed over routinely without inspection of the underlying, more critical principles.

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Seamus O Brian 08 March 2018

Is it not human nature to take the legacy of a man who slept upon the ground and encouraged others to give all their belongings to the poor, and build upon the backs of generations of underfed laborers soaring cathedrals of marble and gold-leafed mahogany to honor his memory? To wield the sword and the disemboweling utensils to ensure that no man strayed from the teachings of He who implored us to love not just our neighbors, but our enemies as well?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2018

The woman who finished one half eaten olive and scooped the rest into her pockets, walked her tiny pride home to children who looked at her smile and saw the salvation of a meal.......touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 March 2018

Such an interesting poem by Bob Hicok๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 March 2017

'The salvation of a meal Great imagery. Congrats on the Poem of the Day.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 08 March 2017

A well expressed piece of poem. Thanks for sharing with us. Sylva

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 March 2017

Of a meal! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Lantz Pierre 08 March 2017

A brilliant meditation on real worth of human suffering and the true meaning of the teachings of a humble interloper in Palestine who's gospels became institutionalized in Rome. I imagine the speaker of the poem is a lowly charwoman/dishwasher/busboy in a fancy restaurant in the city of seven hills. She is a devoted person and not without an understanding of the books of the Bible and great works of religious art. But it is not the great and lofty that commands her attentions. She serves others. She makes do with the smallest of offerings for a meal. She is drawn not to the words of the rich and powerful but the humble kindness of one who thanks her for her least offering of water. A very effective re-imagining in modern times of the enduring meaning of a prophet who spoke two thousand years ago. This poem concentrates its energies on the goodness and kindness of human acts and the grand decrees and laws which are only so many words. Touching.

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Tom Allport 08 March 2017

an interesting poem of might have happened after the last supper? god only knows!

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Sue Ann Simar 31 March 2007

yes, words outside the box or the framework of the picture-.

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Bob Hicok

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