By The Window Seat Comments

Arsmitha, I like how your images pile up; they're a strong part of this poem. Some of your ESL(?) mistakes harm the poem (buildings, tall and stout, in race) . What is with those apostrophes at the end of some lines? Makes no sense. You should immerse yourself in good contemporary poetry before composing more of your own work. If you'd like, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Let me know how you like it. Yrs, JC