Monday, March 16, 2009

By The Well Comments

Rating: 5.0

The journey will be long …
The voice of silence is so loud!
My soul thirsts!
A silent tear insists on falling.
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obed Souza
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Noel Horlanda 21 September 2009

This piece is full of faith and love...well done. Thanks for the reminder, it makes me a new man. Take care...

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Matt Mooney 15 August 2009

'For I have carved your name on the palms of my hands' (New Testement) . We are not forgotten or down the ranks in God's great plan for us. The poem brings us back to Jesus at the well and the mercy and compassion he showed to sinners there who came to see him. We all need to go to the well now and then. A poem of weight in its import and yet beautifully light poetically. Read my poem 'Carpenter's Son' which I added on yesterday.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

A lovely poem with positive approach.10++

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i enjoyed it in its entirety.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 21 March 2009

Beautiful poem. ' The voice of silence so loud ', very true. A very good example of broken imagery........10/10.

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