Thursday, August 2, 2007

By The Way Her Name Was Mathilde Comments

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Nineteen hundred and fifty,
There were a lot of girls
Out on the town then,
I was seventeen and
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Mike Tonkin
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Ruth Walters 20 December 2012

Mathilde, first 'love conquest'? A learning curve? Never to be forgotten, obviously..................

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rachael richmond 02 August 2007

this poem has quite a build up, a strong one....but where did it go to? i found the ending just fizzled out.... like you were remembering a neighbour or someone like that...... rachael

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