Sunday, February 7, 2010

By The Wall, By The Tree Comments

Rating: 2.8

By the wall, by the tree,
A frail flower grew:
It reached it's small buds
Toward the sun, for it knew
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Patti Masterman
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Kesav Easwaran 21 February 2010

good piece Patty...your poem sings sweet...the theme is life and its wonders and you bring them in 3D...10

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Andrew Moss 16 February 2010

Rani and Krissy are both right, great poem

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Krissy Alley 07 February 2010

very very nice. Randi is right. I could read it over and over. It sounds so beautiful. great job -Krissy

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Rani Turton 07 February 2010

Beautiul text and imagery, lines are worth reading and re-reading over again.

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