Tuesday, October 2, 2012

By The Summer Sea Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sunlight and shrill cicada and the low,
Slow, sleepy kissing of the sea and shore,
And rumor of the wind. The morning wore
A sullen face of fog that lifted slow,
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Madison Julius Cawein
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Susan Williams 22 January 2016

Can there be descriptions better written than these? Read those verses and close your eyes and you are there by the sea and you will hear the seagulls shriek and feel the sand between your toes. Absolutely top-notch writing! ! ! - - - - Sunlight and shrill cicada and the low, Slow, sleepy kissing of the sea and shore, And rumor of the wind. - - - - -A sullen face of fog that lifted slow, Letting her eyes gleam through of grayest glow; - - - - -But now the day has put off every care, And sits at peace beside the smiling sea, Dreaming bright dreams with lazy-lidded eyes:

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* Sunprincess * 22 January 2016

....most lovely with a beautiful diction.. ..and excellent personification of morning ★

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