By The Sea Comments
As we drive into the parking lot and pull into a spot,
The seashore park receives us with open arms and a friendly welcoming gesture,
While fresh salty scent of the ocean playfully slips into the car through the open windows
And sprinkles its blessing on our heads, leaving a vague feeling of longing and contentedness in the backseat;
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When the sun had stumbled down to the horizon, its radiance begun to dwindle, that is a really cool image. good job. Becca
Very astonishing.....You have made a real good portray of the scene that seems to have touched your heart....best wishes....
Very vivid. I could almost feel myself there. Well done with the description.
lines are penned in such a beatific way......can feel the real pleasant cool breeze while goin thr your poem.....sebastine...
Excellent word picture Leslie, almost sensual one might say...
you have made a descriptive poem...seems you give vividly view of you saw....very beautiful to read....nice and wonderful for class for literature.......it sense of the day...thank you...God bless
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7/25/2025 11:14:49 AM # 1.0.0
I'm impressed. The imagery is powerful and the reader (well, this reader anyway) feels like he is there at the scene. Simple yet evocative.