Sunday, November 26, 2017

By The Riverside Comments

Rating: 5.0

He took her for a walk by the riveside
Whispered to her you are my bride
The moon kissed the glistening streams
And he sang a song about his dreams
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Rini Shibu
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 27 November 2017

An excellent write with great rhyme. Love holds us spellbound.

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Rini Shibu 27 November 2017

Thanks Rose for posting your feedback

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 November 2017

The moon kissed the glistening streams And he sang a song about his dreams ................................................................. She looked into his eyes filled with love And they flew to the cloud like doves.....fantastic expression with romance and dreams. Beautifully crafted. Thank u Rini for sharing this lovely poem.10

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks a lot Kumar for posting your feedback

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 November 2017

Hi Rini, Beautiful poem on love, care and of course, dreams. Wonderfully written, verily enjoyable. A 100+++

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Unnikrishnan for reviewing.. Your words encourages me a lot

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Lamar Cole 26 November 2017

This is a very beautiful and enjoyable poem about by the riverside.

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Lam your words mean a lot to me

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 November 2017

Very entertaining and exciting poem Rini, enjoyed the splendid poetic expression! I would love to quote: She looked into his eyes filled with love/And they flew to the clouds like a dove…Your poem depicts love and dreams in utter sumptuousness…Fascinating little poem…10/10

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Dillip for reading and commenting

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Akhtar Jawad 26 November 2017

And they flew to the clouds like a dove A beautiful picture of true love materialized in a happy life.

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Rini Shibu 26 November 2017

Thanks Akhtar for reading and commenting

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