Tuesday, March 16, 2010

By The River Comments

Rating: 5.0

there by the river a girl cries
for she has told everyone she loves lies
she feels horrible and sad
for she has lost everything she had
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Christina Phan 20 February 2011

very strong and really touching poem I enjoy this poem the most (: you such good writer 10++

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Michael Brock 19 April 2010

Very powerful imagery and intense, scary and moving. Wild, very difficult and so powerfully written. very good poem thanks for sharing this, Michael

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Iron Panda 23™ 26 March 2010

this is sad: ( but its really good^-^

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