Thursday, July 1, 2010

*by The River Comments

Rating: 2.7

By the river I waited for the birds to come
To bring me leaves of romance,
Yet hours passed and none came
To the azure of light even a single one
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Catrina Heart
COMMENTS
Woo Who 02 August 2010

It was long yet I couldn't stop till I finished. Beauty.

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Kesav Easwaran 12 July 2010

poignant tale...the ending lines carry hope and resoluteness...10

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Marieta Maglas 06 July 2010

A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 03 July 2010

a beautiful narration leaving much to think about. marks 10, shan

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Eyan Desir 03 July 2010

This is beautiful writing Well express.... Well done

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Braja K Sarkar 03 July 2010

Nice poem.I like it, specially for the positive thinking of the poet..Thanks Catrina..

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Kristina Jones 02 July 2010

Beautiful imagery xxx

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