By the river I waited for the birds to come
To bring me leaves of romance,
Yet hours passed and none came
To the azure of light even a single one
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poignant tale...the ending lines carry hope and resoluteness...10
A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully.
a beautiful narration leaving much to think about. marks 10, shan
Nice poem.I like it, specially for the positive thinking of the poet..Thanks Catrina..
It was long yet I couldn't stop till I finished. Beauty.