Friday, September 23, 2011

By The Lake Comments

Rating: 4.0

Morning walkers were returning to home
I had no mission; so I had no rush
I sat on a bench nearby;
Chill wind from Lake Ontario was blowing over me
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Aastha Uppal 25 September 2011

like the flow of the poem.really well written.imagery, narration of a story, the mystery..all the elements to hold on the readers..nice write! !

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