Tuesday, November 7, 2017

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Jeremy Willson
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Jette Blackstone 07 November 2017

An interesting mix of the senses in the last line. I had to read this one a few times to get the meaning. The speaker wishes to freeze in place a taste of a touch (so cold) . I suppose one can wish to never lose something that has left them....yet the only way to maintain it, is to put it on ice, so to speak...yet it is not the same. Nice writing.

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Jeremy Willson 07 November 2017

You got it 🙂. Thank you for the read and comment! .

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