By The End Of This... Comments

A good poem inviting the readers to look into themselves and realize for what they lack to make a good use of their life and throw away the proudness and the filth of superiority complexes.........nothing is permanent so make use of every single moment you elapse...........

Well this is the first time I have read a poem like this well written I dont love death sorry life is 2 sweet

the anaphora''By the end of this poem you will love death'' need to generate the tension.By the end of this poem he will love death, the truth comes at the end of this poem and the truth is that ego kill his pride.intelligently penned..10++