Sunday, March 18, 2007

By The Bank Of The River Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nestled in the valley of hope
Down by the river of dreams
A beautiful girl with silvery hair
Ponders her future, unpicking the seams
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Not a member No 4 25 June 2007

You kept this reader with you from start to end of your contemplative journey. I liked this. I hope you're still writing Michelle!

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Declan McHenry 18 March 2007

Michelle, excellent. There is a real dreamy almost fairytale air to this piece.

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Marci Made 18 March 2007

So poignant, so beautiful, so sad and so tenderly expressed are your words here.Your use of descriptive words is elegant and touching. 'Scars run deeper on the inside They are raw and vivid and red'~~~~~~words that touch the reader, for who doesn't have scars, of one kind or another......Yet, the ending, after she realizes and accepts, you feel her acceptance and calmness, feeling the 'coolness' around her as she knows there's nothing else................This should touch the hearts of many Em~~~~~(btw~~~Happy Mothers Day, across the Pond~~~) marci :) xo

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Michelle Tiddy

Michelle Tiddy

Staffordshire, England
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