By The Bank Of The River Comments

You kept this reader with you from start to end of your contemplative journey. I liked this. I hope you're still writing Michelle!

Michelle, excellent. There is a real dreamy almost fairytale air to this piece.

So poignant, so beautiful, so sad and so tenderly expressed are your words here.Your use of descriptive words is elegant and touching. 'Scars run deeper on the inside They are raw and vivid and red'~~~~~~words that touch the reader, for who doesn't have scars, of one kind or another......Yet, the ending, after she realizes and accepts, you feel her acceptance and calmness, feeling the 'coolness' around her as she knows there's nothing else................This should touch the hearts of many Em~~~~~(btw~~~Happy Mothers Day, across the Pond~~~) marci :) xo